Thursday, October 4, 2012

How Liza became a shaman.

Once, in a big family of pandas in the middle of a bamboo forest, a panda bear was born. From her birth everybody knew she was very special. Her name was Liza.As she grew up, Liza had so many adventures. She kept bugging her friends to go to explore, and one day she managed to persuade them to go on a hike to the mountain. Five pandas packed all the things they needed to go for the day, and at last when they were ready, they started walking. And walking. And walking, and walking, etc. They stoped for a drink and a snack, and then continued walking. They arrived to a river and stoped again to play in the floating logs, relax their paws in the cool, transparent water and eat some more food. (Pandas eat a lot). Then they walked some more and suddenly came to a rocky wall, almost vertical. Now, pandas are big animals with big paws, so climbing is almost imposible for them. but Liza was too adventure loving and brave to let a rocky wall stop her. So she took out from her bag a thick rope, tied it to a tree and the other side to her waist, and started climbing and climbing until she managed all the way to the top. She called to her friends to climb up with her, using the side of the rope that she had taken up with her to avoid falls. Not very convinced, three of her friends decided to have a go climbing up with her. But one of them was to scared so he decided to stay behind waiting for the others to come back. So all the others climbed the wall to get were Liza was. After that they continued the hike walking through a plain meadow and suddenly came to a river. It was a giant river with tremendous waves striking towards the shore. Was Liza scared? Not a bit. She kept calm. ``Arent you scared?´´ asked one of the three remaining pandas with her? ``What we have to do is to wade through it, but we need a fallen log´´ said Liza. So they looked around an soon found a suitable one. They dragged it to the shore and eventually they got it like a bridge. Liza entered the river and started wading through the rapids holding tightly to the log. She finally came to the other side. ``Come on´´ she called to her friends. ``It is easy´´. And although one of them was too scared to try, the other two made it. They walked and walked until they came to a very steep hill. But that definetly wasn´t a problem and they all managed to do it really easily. But behind the hill there was a huge forest. The trees covered the sky. It was dull and dim and full of cobwebs. But Liza didn´t give up and started going forwatd. Her two friends followed her. And, after a while, one of Liza´s friends gave up and decided to go back home. So the two remaining fellows continued. They realized that they were going upwards. So, at last, they came out of the forest. They were at the top of the mountain! ``Yay!´´ cheered Liza. ``We made it!´´ But suddenly there was a great beam of golden light. Terrified, Liza´s friend ran away. But Liza stayed calm, until the beam of light took shape. ``Who are you?´´ asked Liza. ``I am Zios, the sky father.´´ the figure awnsered. ``What do you want from me?´´ asked Liza. ``I have made a world called Jamaa´´. Zios awnsered. ``It has many lands, and we are looking for animals to enjoy it. We think you could be one of them.´´ ``Ok´´ awnsered Liza. So she was taken to the magical land of Jamaa, and met Mira. ``This is the land you have beeen asigned´´ said Mira. ``Decorate it however you want´´. But it was very late, so Liza just made a quick hut in the middle of a bamboo forest in her land and went to sleep. The next morning, when she woke up she started thinking about her land. She decided it should be a township with lots of fun for animals to meet new friends. So she made Jamaa Township and put in it a special statue in honour of Mira.
Hope ya liked it! Please coment!

27 comments:

  1. That was cool nice job and if you want the story on grely come meets in Jamaa
    From: youmeandher

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    1. That was a cool story

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    2. did you know that pandas aren't bears?

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  2. ☼pielover4ever☼Friday, October 05, 2012

    That is an amazing story! I loved it!

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  4. sorry i removed it but i love your story

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  5. this was a very nice story you should make more! XD

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  6. Why are they called shamans if they are not witchdoctors? (thats what the dictionary says they are)

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    1. ikr.well probably because lisa can do some "MAGIC".sort of hey do u have a account on aj? buddy user :linda58160

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  7. i am new to the blog. i loved the story! i hope you don't mind if i tell it to other jammers.
    3berrygirl

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  8. this story is so cool I luv it... :) <3

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  9. nice u wrote that right?ok um mcb have u evere concidered unloking ur den so people who atent ur buddies can see it buddy mcb my user linda58160

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  10. cool and........I WISH I WAS A MEMBER ON ANIMAL JAM

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  11. did u make that up? if so your a good storyteller!

    ps my name is hermancat24

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  12. Epic!! I saw ur den once, epic as potatoes :3

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    1. Oops, and ya btw name is FoxAndRaven. Sry bout dat Mister :3

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  13. I keep having dreams about Animal Jam. A while ago I had a dream that I was the arctic wolf alpha, my name was Princess! I think there should be an alpha for every animal, If they don't exist on the animal jam website, we can always just make them up (or dream about them). I also had a dream just last night that greely had a son, I can't remember his name though. Btw I had a dream about the cheetah alpha, her name is Savannah.

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    1. I forgot to say that in my dream (the one where I was the arctic wolf alpha) the phantoms cornered me and I ran up a tree and I ended up hanging onto a thin branch that was about to snap and I was about to fall in some lava then the branch snapped and I was falling and Cosmo saved me and all the jammers where saying "you could have died!" and Cosmo said that too! Btw there was lava because in my dream I was at a volcano and it was erupting and Cosmo and I where leading some jammers up a hill to escape the lava, I went back to see if there where any jammers still there when the phantoms cornered me! Btw there where no jammers there when I went back.

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  14. hanka4578 (Hanka17804, hanka2012, hankaturtlebunnyuser and hankapandaprofile)Wednesday, April 30, 2014

    Umm, you know that the story isn't true? Because Liza didn't come when Zios showed her Jamaa, Liza and the Alphas came when the phantoms attacked Jamaa! Get it now? I'm not saying your story is stupid, it's just not the same. Maybe the Alphas were all best friends and Zios met them and told them to look after the animal world and be Alphas.

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    1. hanka4578 (Hanka17804, hanka2012, hankaturtlebunnyuser and hankapandaprofile)Wednesday, April 30, 2014

      I am sorry! I didn't mean to say it's horrible. You're my buddy and you won't unbuddy me, right? Your story is a GREAT version.

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  15. I LOVED IT!!!!
    YOU MUST REALLY LOVE ANIMAL JAM DUDE!!

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