Saturday, May 24, 2014

How Eagles came to Jamaa

While she glided over the canyons, the majestic young eagle which was searching for crystals thought about how things used to be in that desert. It brought her so many memories.
Years before, in that desert, two adult eagles were chatting over the nest. The eggs would probably hatch soon and they were very eager to get to know their sons and daughters.
Sharpeye and Lightstar. They were probably the most happy and kind couple in Eagle Rocks, the desser in which the whole clan of eagles lived. Even the leaders of the clan had two recognised that the two of them were great flyers, intelligent and generous, great members of the society.
All the clan was eager for their eggs to hatch. But they didn't notice the black cloud.
As soon as Dusty, the eldest eagle, saw it, he paralised with fear. He had heard lots of stories about phantoms, those hideous creatures who took over lands, making animals who had lived there all their lifes move away. Dusty had heard that most of the animals that had had that experience had found a home in a magical and faraway land called Jamaa, but he wasn't sure about how eagles would adapt to life there.
And the clous kept getting closer and closer, until it blocked all the light.
Everyone was panicking. The leaders tried to put order, but everyone just tried to save themselves and protect their eggs.
"Quick!" said Lightstar. The leaders were giving out sacks from the abandoned saloon, and everyone was filling them with their eggs and flying away with them.
Days later, all the eagles had found a spot some distance away in which they hid with their eggs. It was a rainforest, full of places to hide and trees to make nests on.
And about a week later, the whole clan was starting to forget about the phantoms and how they probably wouldn't be going back home, because eggs were starting to hatch.
But it was in that moment of joy in which the phantoms came back, and started shooting rays at the eggs, and electrocuting the eagles.
"What creature" thought Sharpeye, "is capable of such evil acts? What kind of demon would break eggs?"
But as everyone knows, phantom's objective is just to cause chaos and destruction, and they are too evil to even wonder about other's feelings.
One of these phantoms was really enjoying himself, shooting his blue rays and filling himself of satisfaction every time he killed an eagle or broke an egg. He even used his mental powers (which all phantoms have because their lack of paws mean they cannot hold anything, and their legs are only for flying) to throw rocks at all the nests.
But suddenly this phantom heard a cry, the most deep and terrible scream of pain, and he saw a nest full of broken shells and dead chicks. This was Sharpeye and Lightstar's nest, and they were absolutely devastated about the loss of their chicks. But one was still alive, though it had an egg shell stuck in it's eye.
Suddenly, the phantom felt sad for them, and for the first time in his life, he had a feeling of empathy and hoovered to them.
But a bigger phantom came, and shot a ray at the couple. As the phantom watched with his now sad eye, they held wings, and in a last whisper said to each other: "I love you". Then, looking at the only chick left, Lightstar said to the phantom. "Make sure she lives".
And with those last words, the ray hit them and they died together.
The phantom felt a tear come out of his eye. He had seen animals cry, but didn't even know phantoms could cry. Although he hated water, he didn't mind now. He used his powers to lift the chick up, and carefully concentrated until he got the shell out of her eye. Then he hid her behind a bush.
But a phantom with a much higher status, a red one, saw it, and said.
"How can you? How can you help an animal? Are you crying? We phantoms don't cry! We don't care about those stinky animals? You do not deserved to live!"
"I know I will die now" said the good phantom. "But I am happy to have learned about kindness and solidarity before my death. Kill me now if you want to, but please let the chick live."
As a response, the phantom shot a red ray, and the first phantom ever to have a good feeling fell dead.
The other phantom didn't want to let the chick live, at he didn't have empathy, but he forgot about it and went away.
From the sky, Zios and Mira were looking at this. They had seen the phantom die, and although not even them had the power to bring the dead back, they made the spirit of the phantom lift up and let it's energy fill the sky forever, together with all the positive energy of the dead.

As she kept on gliding, Cloudeye remembered all this, which Mira had told her. The only sequel she had from that attack was her left eye, which hadn't recovered from the damaged and didn't work very well. But she was happy that after all those years living in Jamaa with the surviving eagles, which ahd reproduced, she could go bakc to all the eagle's birthplace and help find crystals there. As for the rainforest in which she was born, she hoped one day she would fly back there.

Hope you liked it!


  1. Incredibley AMAZING.


    1. your welcome :)


  2. This story is sure filled with drama, but I like drama :D

    1. A while ago, I had a dream with a good Phantom in it! The Phantom turned into an arctic wolf at the end of my dream. :)

  3. A while back when Arctic Wolves came in gift cards only, I had a dream that I was one.
    Another AJ dream that I had was that my favorite actress had an AJ account and we had twin wolves, except her wolf was raspberry colored and mine was icy blue.

    Anyways, great story Mister Chunkybuddy, the part where the eaglets in the eggs died was sad, but it was an amazing story!

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  5. MrChunkyBuddy, I was wondering if you could buddy me. Its okay if u dont want to.


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